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A Temporal Eternity

by ~Aeon018

Where does time travel to?
When the race is over,
What has it gone through?

A second by second eternity.

Where do we journey to?
When our destination's reached,
Who will be left beside me and you?

Will time fall still,
Breed stale air and dry out mouths?

In this second by second eternity,
Will time fall still?
For you?
For me?

One perpetual end;
Will time stand?
Will time fall still?

Will I clear my throat, clear my mind,
And in that last forever find,
That I can speak the answers,
And save all of time?
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Edit: I decided to rewrite the ending last night.



Free-verse, no real form. Originally wrote it about about one and a half years ago, but I changed it around a little.

I figured I should try to put some of my writing up. Since I haven't been able to write anything I deem good in a while, I figure this might help break that. I feel it waiting to break through.
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i'm working on it kinda lol

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Yes your writing should go up here indeed...

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